What social grace you have. I mean that sincerely. Not many people could express such a critical opinion framed in a way that made the argument audible. I should be taking notes.
I also, overall, admire the portrait and, without any doubt respect the artist for a very rich piece of fine art and the subject for who she is.
That said, this is a well thought out opinion. And looking again at the portrait through these rational criticisms, I am mostly in agreement. The setting is less a bother to me. I understand and appreciate the metaphor at work and understand that such works often must tell a large story on a small canvas so ... I will say that it could be worse. Better maybe, but definitely worse.
What venue might you have chosen?
The comments as to the choices in adornment or lack thereof are extremely compelling and I am inclined to just say "as you say".
In particular the lack of a crown, either on her head, in her hands or hanging on a coat rack nearby is unsettling. The trappings he chose are not those one immediately associates with Sovereign or Monarch. She might well be a religious figure (which is another discussion, isn't it?) and the robes and dress make her look more matronly, in a dress-up kind of way, that I believe befits her station.
She *IS* the Queen of England. And she may indeed reflect and be reflective, lonely and a windowless monad, for all we know - but the Crown does not feel like a ceremonial trapping, as the robes do. The Crown is
the symbol, in a literal, figurative and alliterative way, of her Sovereignty. It is NOT a trapping, it is the token or symbol of an entire way of life for an entire group of peoples. In Canada we swear allegiance to "The Crown". When we hunt we hunt on "Crown Land". When they take you to court, it is "The Crown" arresting you.
I understand the intent was casual - but the result is not, it is just crownless. There is nothing casual about it. Her facial pose does not count - she *has* no casual look that I have ever seen. Thank the gods.
But it IS a very good likeness of her face and he has done a magnificent job of sharing her kindness and the even stare of the truly compassionate, so there is that
Again, thanks for the assessment.